2021-05-18 : Writing

Before

After

Yesterday, I went to shopping mall nearby because I was dying to eat sushi. But, it was not easy to find the store in the huge mall like pulling teeth. I was running around like chicken with its head cut off. I was a nervous wreck, but I have one-track mind for eating sushi. I was nuts about finding the store and I eventually found it and I bought two packs of suchi. But I didn’t want to drive a hard bargain. Because it was not a top dollar. After I got back home, I ate. It was worth my while. It’s out of this world! I became a happy camper!

Yesterday, I went to the shopping mall nearby because I was dying to eat sushi.  But, finding the store in the huge mall was like pulling teeth.  I was running around like achicken with its head cut off.  I was a nervous wreck, but I have a one-track mind for eating sushi.  I went nuts looking for the store and I eventually found it. I bought two packs of sushi and I didn’t have to drive a hard bargain. I didn't pay top dollar. After I got back home, I ate.  It was worth my while.  The sushi was out of this world and I was a happy camper!