Describing Graphs - ex_01 : Divorce Rates in Finland and Sweden

 

서론: 차트가 보여주는 내용과 기간을 한두 문장으로 소개합니다. 개요: 차트의 전반적인 추세와 특징을 두세 문장으로 간략하게 설명하며, 숫자나 날짜는 포함하지 않습니다. 세부 내용: 차트의 구체적인 특징을 두세 개의 단락으로 나누어 설명하며, 숫자와 백분율 등 가능한 많은 세부 정보를 포함합니다.

The bar chart provides information about the percentages of divorces in Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015.  Overall, Sweden experienced a downward trend, while Finland showed an upward trend throughout the period. Both countries' divorce rates have fluctuations. Although Finland initially had a lower rate, it outraced Sweden at the end of the period. Sweden's divorce rate was about 45% in 2011, being higher than Finland's rate by approximately 8%. Then, it rose to almost 50% percent in 2012. However, the figure showed a gradual decrease to about 47% in 2013. continued to decline steadily to the end of the period, reaching around 45% in 2014 and hitting a low-point of about 37% in 2015. Percentage of divorces in Finland was less than 40% in 2011, and it decreased in 2012, when about one third of marriages in Finland ended with a divorce, as opposed to almost half in Sweden. However, the figure experienced a steady growth during next two years, rise to rate 39% in 2013, increased by around 3% in 2014, and outracing the rate of Sweden.

 

 

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